Thursday, December 5, 2013


So, I get the grade for my most recent assignment in my Foundations of Business Class.  We were required to write out a business plan and explain the various pros, cons, threats, and the like.  Out of 100, I received an 87.  I was a bit confused by this so I asked why the 87?  My instructor first said it was because I didn't use APA Format.  However, I had and showed him exactly where I had gotten the instructions on how to do so.  I also told him that I had written several papers for other courses without any reprimand.  He came back to say that it was because I hadn't chosen the right topics.  Again, I pointed out I used one of the topics he'd suggested and asked if I had made a mistake and if I needed to re-do the paper as he'd listed different topics in another area but I followed the rules he had given.

He then came back with this: "You never lose credit because of your Business Example! You lost points because you did not do your best in your articulation and you know that. Please read again my comments on your SWOT Analysis grade report."

Um...O-K.  Wow...I mean

Now I may have mentioned before that I am not very good with academic writing.  Hence why I am taking courses.  Some of you may recall a story I told concerning a similar situation.  I was taking courses at another college -- Business Writing to be exact and if you've ever taken a class like that there are strict guidelines and rules to follow when preparing your papers.  I was constantly getting dinged several different ways on mine and I couldn't figure out why so I went to my instructor and asked for her opinion.  

She took me aside and said, "Actually, I've read all of your papers and I think I see the issue.  You're a novel writer aren't you?"  To say my jaw hit the floor would be an understatement, since I hadn't mentioned this to anyone at the time.  I asked her, "How did you know?"  And she replied, "Because I've written novels and short stories and I've had other students in this class who write the same way you do and they always have trouble.  Meaning that you have difficulties staying inside the iron box that is academic writing."  So she gave me a few pointers on how to set aside my novel writing instinct (no small feat) and my business writing improved.

Now that was several years ago, so I don't recall what she said.  And maybe I did slip back into novel writing mode but the accusation that I just "didn't do my best" has pissed me off considerably.  Don't accuse me of not trying when I write.  The instructor and the class knows I'm an e-book writer (the business plan I made was for an e-book publisher) although I haven't told them exactly what I write.  I was sitting at work, wondering how I should handle this situation.  Should I say something to him and make it quite clear that I've written several novels and have never been told that I'm not doing my best -- at least not to my recollection.  Sure there's editing but this is not the same.

So what do you, my fellow writers and readers think?  Should I just let it go and move on?  I'm probably going to clear a B in the class anyway so it really doesn't matter in the long run but still...

Meanwhile I'm still waiting with baited breath for an agent response.

I'm having a glass of wine now...

Peace ~ 

Paperback Writer
The Beatles

Paper back writer (paperback writer)
Dear Sir or Madam, will you read my book?
It took me years to write, will you take a look?
It's based on a novel by a man named Lear
And I need a job, so I want to be a paperback writer,
Paperback writer.

It's a dirty story of a dirty man
And his clinging wife doesn't understand.
Their son is working for the Daily Mail,
It's a steady job but he wants to be a paperback writer,
Paperback writer.

Paperback writer (paperback writer)

It's a thousand pages, give or take a few,
I'll be writing more in a week or two.
I can make it longer if you like the style,
I can change it round and I want to be a paperback writer,
Paperback writer.

If you really like it you can have the rights,
It could make a million for you overnight.
If you must return it, you can send it here
But I need a break and I want to be a paperback writer,
Paperback writer.

Paperback writer (paperback writer)

Paperback writer - paperback writer
Paperback writer - paperback writer

Lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC

1 comment:

Kelliko said...

Just let it go. He was being a dick. It may have been a bad day for him and he was taking it out in you. Though we both know what I would do, but do as I say, not as I do, because we both know that has not helped me in the past. Especially if you are going to pull a B out of the class anyway.